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The human heart #2

Here is the second version of the human heart poem. Read it separately first but ten maybe compare it to the last and see if you think having some of the words taken out gave it more depth or less and let me know your thoughts on both. Version three will be soon.

The Human heart #2

Apart.Depart. It trembles.

It beats. it throbs.

Born, to build. To break.

Dawn–aglow. Dusk– it shakes

–shatters–withers–

echoes of love

fear

sorrow

–life is loss–

stitched seams which snap.

Bleeding tears.

Gone.

Vanished

nothing–

a wisp– dreams

passing–passing.

My hollow heart.

silence

the silence

silence in his arms.

Stillness.

Stillness.

–my heart–

-Eva M.M.

Thank you for reading as always!

” Me and the pen, we are one. If its ink would cease to flow, my ink would cease to flow.”

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I am a young and enthusiastic writer, fresh out of highschool and into college at IUSB. I babysit and work and live life to it's fullest. I write. I read. I do yoga. And plan to become. Yoga intructers as well. I grew up on a farm and can't,t wait to move back to the country in my tiny house I have already planned out. Sometimes I'm a little melodramatic but rarely. I'm a spiritual healer, a hopeless romantic, a book worm, and very nostalgic. Thanks for stopping by.

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