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The human heart #2

Here is the second version of the human heart poem. Read it separately first but ten maybe compare it to the last and see if you think having some of the words taken out gave it more depth or less and let me know your thoughts on both. Version three will be soon.

The Human heart #2

Apart.Depart. It trembles.

It beats. it throbs.

Born, to build. To break.

Dawn–aglow. Dusk– it shakes


echoes of love



–life is loss–

stitched seams which snap.

Bleeding tears.




a wisp– dreams


My hollow heart.


the silence

silence in his arms.



–my heart–

-Eva M.M.

Thank you for reading as always!

” Me and the pen, we are one. If its ink would cease to flow, my ink would cease to flow.”



I am the author of and am currently working on a book of poems. To find out more check out my about me page as well as my page about my blog and welcome to the ink angels community.

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